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Hello My name is Liu Jing jing. I have a sister Liu Wen piang. My father is a dorker and mother is a dorker too. They don’t work on Saturdays and Sundays. They like Shopping on Sundays They like cookingbut I don’t. I like play ing game. In the evenings we watch TV. But my parents don’t. They like listen to music.
名师点评:这是小作者发表的第一篇英语作文,在这篇作文里,小作者向我们介绍了她自己及家庭成员,包括大家的爱好和生活习惯等。不明白的是,文中“dorker”是否为“doctor”?“They like listen to music”改为“They like to listen to music”或“They like listening to music”。用英语来练习写作文,更能激发同学们学习英语的兴趣。
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